Thanks! You can pick any of the stories here => [link]
Most of them are short stories or compilations of them. The big ones are Frail Equilibrium (honestly... it's what started the ball rolling >_>) and Crossfire. You can read those whenever you feel like it, if you want. Feedback can be given any time, I put no pressure Just have fun (I hope).

Well I just finished reading what you've got so far and I think it's hilariously awesome. ^^ BTW props for writing pony fanfiction, hehe *hoofbump* I think my favorite bit so far has been the start, Bael's arrival. I can't put my finger on it, just the way you went about describing it. It was quite hilarious. ^^ I assume this is a fic meant to be read as a comedy, so I treated it as such.

One thing I do want to touch on, which I believe someone already mentioned... since this is a crossover, you probably ought to treat it as though you assume MLP fans and DMC fans have no idea about the other fandom. Even if they do, it's good to cover all your bases and do some explaining/exposition, but don't go overboard since too much exposition gets in the way of storytelling. Like... better refer to Nero by name, to be sure.

Mostly, that's the big thing I had to say (I know, I am a terrible editor, sadly ^_^; ). Other than that, bit more attention to punctuation stuff. I did see a couple of run-on sentences but nothing really glaring, just do a few extra read-throughs before posting next time and if any sentence feels even remotely hinky, read it out loud to yourself (you don't need to be really loud, even whispering works) and if it feels too long, it probably is.

Well for now that's all, but if you add more to it I'll keep reading ^_^