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Greece
I'm a freelance artist and writer, and someone told me I'm an English literature major. I'll believe them since I was drunk and disoriented for most of my academic experience. Somehow I managed to maintain a high CI, though.

Personal Quote: "If you have to write fantasy, don't let it take itself too seriously. Nobody does that anymore."
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  • Mood: Sociable
  • Listening to: The Fear - Ben Howard [Moonlight Matters Rework]
  • Reading: Dreams and Shadows
  • Watching: Dragons: Defenders of Berk
  • Playing: Kingdoms of Amalur: Reckoning
I haven't been around here in ages, ahaha. Wow, well...

I won't lie, I've been busy with work and trying to figure out what to do with myself, with videogames and movies and my hon and shit...

...and I've been a tad... er, lazy and uninspired. Yeah, let's just put it that way. Been writing a bit though, still plugging away at The Sorcerer's Wife and honestly?

I'm wondering what the fuck to do with it now that it's finished and just getting edited to hell and back. Just how DO you get books published? O_o

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:iconpetitecreme:
Petitecreme Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
bleep bloop <3
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ElvenAngel Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Bloop Bloop~!! <3
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KakashiMorph Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013
Happy birthday!
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:iconelvenangel:
ElvenAngel Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^_^ Oh thank you!
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kyuzoaoi Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Artist
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ElvenAngel Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good riddance. Honestly, if you're gonna deal with a cancer, you have to cut it all out otherwise it'll just grow back.
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thebloodreaver Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey. I'm writing this MLPXDMC crossover starring one of the bosses from one of the DMC games... wanna have a look at it and critique it?
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ElvenAngel Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD Sure, why not? I've read crazier crossovers. I could use a fun one.

C: in return... think you could read some of my stuff and gimme some feedback too? Even if it's off-the-top-pf-your-head comments. Give an' take deal!
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thebloodreaver Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sure. Link me to what you wanna see.

Anyway, here's my stupid little story --> [link]
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ElvenAngel Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! You can pick any of the stories here => [link]
Most of them are short stories or compilations of them. The big ones are Frail Equilibrium (honestly... it's what started the ball rolling >_>) and Crossfire. You can read those whenever you feel like it, if you want. Feedback can be given any time, I put no pressure :p Just have fun (I hope).

Well I just finished reading what you've got so far and I think it's hilariously awesome. ^^ BTW props for writing pony fanfiction, hehe *hoofbump* I think my favorite bit so far has been the start, Bael's arrival. I can't put my finger on it, just the way you went about describing it. It was quite hilarious. ^^ I assume this is a fic meant to be read as a comedy, so I treated it as such.

One thing I do want to touch on, which I believe someone already mentioned... since this is a crossover, you probably ought to treat it as though you assume MLP fans and DMC fans have no idea about the other fandom. Even if they do, it's good to cover all your bases and do some explaining/exposition, but don't go overboard since too much exposition gets in the way of storytelling. Like... better refer to Nero by name, to be sure.

Mostly, that's the big thing I had to say (I know, I am a terrible editor, sadly ^_^; ). Other than that, bit more attention to punctuation stuff. I did see a couple of run-on sentences but nothing really glaring, just do a few extra read-throughs before posting next time and if any sentence feels even remotely hinky, read it out loud to yourself (you don't need to be really loud, even whispering works) and if it feels too long, it probably is.

Well for now that's all, but if you add more to it I'll keep reading ^_^
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